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January 15, 2010January 15, 2010  2 comments  Dedications and memoirs

"His physical appearance astounded me. Like fresh red roses growing on a snowy mountainside, under which rare green emeralds reside. He was dashing, soft-spoken and sincere. Contrasting his gentle appearance was his astounding green eyes, with a stare which could cut through glass. This timidity hid the frustration within, to which one could only hazard a guess. Like the roses growing in the snow, he was strong. Like the emeralds, he was rare. His persona was just and fair.

Quiet as a mouse, yet as brave as a lion. As brilliant as the first Winter snow, yet as mysterious as each star in the night sky.

Bear with me please, for I need you to know; there is no other place I would rather go. When I get to that special place, there is nothing more I ask than your warm embrace.

So please join me now, come find me here; end all my nightmares and chase away all my fears."


I wrote this in the early hours of the morning when I couldn't sleep. It is the 1st part to a slightly larger piece of writing. It is nowhere near complete.

 

 

 

 

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The 2nd part of the poem/creative writing I dedicate to somebody who means a lot to me.
 
January 15, 2010January 15, 2010  0 comments  Dedications and memoirs
This is the 2nd part:

 

"With determination full of fire like the Sun and emotions deep like the Ocean, he captivates me. His radiant appearance dazzles and throws me into the shimmering pool of fascination. His hair was long and angelic and, as he glances across; his eyes sparkle with a luminous glimmer, showing his brilliant intellect. Astounding green hues eminate from his eyes with such charm, among occasional twinkles of blues among glorious brown undertones. Such warmth was apparent from his blazing red hair, reflecting his desires and pride burning fiercely and with such zeal."


Ich liebe dich mein schatz. Ich liebe Dich in allen Sprachen der Welt.

 

Again, this needs editing and improving.
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January 18, 2010January 18, 2010  0 comments  Dedications and memoirs


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My 5th poem. This is back to the good stuff! :D Here you go Mister (and everyone else for that matter).
 
January 18, 2010January 18, 2010  0 comments  Dedications and memoirs

POST EDITED 2010-01-22 14:53:02

 

 

 

I was on the way home when I wrote this.


"The first I saw was your cute smiling face,
I never thought I'd need your embrace.
So deep inside these feelings lie,
to abandon them I could never try.

Those words of yours are edged with gold,
I never thought you could be so cold.
Sometimes I find I can't keep up,
so now I'm just well and truly stuck.

This bizarre event so strange it seems,
we were both split off into teams.
I represent the British side,
America is across the tide.

This feeling here; so pure, so true.
All I ever want to hold is you.
Not casual one-week type affairs,
more long-term romance and commitment. I will dare."

 


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